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#41 Diabolical rhapsody

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Posted 19 March 2014 - 01:40 AM

So instead of putting out a specifc magic and making individual bullets, will it be fine to say Tengu magic?

 

It will involve Shapeshifting, Flight, Warp Speed and other stuff...



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Posted 19 March 2014 - 01:43 AM

@L: Edited the NPC sheet to reflect the change in properties of the blade.  Can you explain to me how Blood Demon transformation goes?

 

 

Spoiler Miyazaki Rin

Edited by louipwns, 19 March 2014 - 01:44 AM.


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Posted 19 March 2014 - 01:51 AM

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Spoiler Kasumi


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Posted 19 March 2014 - 01:52 AM

@L: Edited. Will this be any better

 

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Posted 19 March 2014 - 02:12 AM

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Name: Kasumi

Theme Song: TBA

Age: 27

Gender: Female

Race: Jurogumo

Faction: N/A

Faction Info: N/A


Backstory: She is born and raised Archne. She always has had trouble with dealing with human and because of this, she is always on edge as she is concerned with what people think of her and is also concerned with the intentions of humans. She ultimately wants to be friends with people but has trouble getting past her appearance. She is use to being attacked by other people due to her Appearance.

Relationships: N/A

Occupation Skills: Hunter, Spy, Merc.

-Combat-
Equipment: A Katana and a pet Spider.


Abilities:
As a predator, she has several powers and abilities that allow her to track, capture and kill her prey.

Jurogumo Powers: Jurogumo boast amazing spinning prowess and because of their half spider physiology, they are gifted with a great deal of speed and Stealth. They combined their webb spinning with their dexterity and stealth to become one of the most ultimate ambush predators. (note that though Arachne are considered demons, they are not evil)

Spoiler Youkai Abilities


Outstanding Traits

•Ambush Tactics: Speed is her best quality. She is all about Stealth and Mobility. combining this with her wide ranges of abilities, she can overwhelm her opponent easily. Since she is an ambush attacker, she usually attacks an opponent's Blind spot, subduing the opponent before they can even react. (please note that reaction speed is stressed as she is an ambush fighter. Also note that her movements are silent so even the best hearing can't detect her.)

 

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Does this mean you're done or just another update?


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Posted 19 March 2014 - 02:21 AM

yes... done... just gotta spoiler the whole thing and we should be good


Edited by Dreamcatcher, 19 March 2014 - 02:21 AM.


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Posted 19 March 2014 - 02:24 AM

Then the history....is quite short, leaves a lot out. Though, it was never said (at least I don't think so) how exactly long it had to be, but at least enough to know more about the character and such, though, I'm just used to seeing longer backgrounds. lol


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#48 Dreamcatcher

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Posted 19 March 2014 - 02:51 AM

ehh I usually fill backgrouds in as we go



#49 ~L~

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Posted 19 March 2014 - 04:30 AM

You'll still need to describe her life story in more detail though. That's what the backstory is for, also it's called "Backstory", so it's what has happened with your character up until the RP's beginning.



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Posted 19 March 2014 - 04:36 AM

Spoiler The Lawyer

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Manty is a being of Chaos afterall. It was only natural he'd confuse you.

 


#51 ~L~

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Posted 19 March 2014 - 04:51 AM

Hmmmm. Looks to be alright.

 

Of course, could use some better formatting, you know, bolds and italics and stuff, but I don't see anything wrong.

 

That can go on through.



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Posted 19 March 2014 - 04:59 AM

@pwns:   Yeah, I'll keep that in mind, but I have this slightly built opinion that for Orochi, you exist to her as much as she exists to you, which is to say that the only time she would consider such a course is if she'd been left no other options and that was the best option or it would eventually become an issue in her mind as a way to leave behind her heirs and give them the best fighting chance, but I'm uncertain if love could play into it (maybe, I'd have to see how Daisuke acted a bit more). Otherwise, people are pieces to be moved about as serves her best, and at that time and to this day, having Daisuke in a position of power served her morals and existence best.  (In fact, the only reason I really had her suggest that, was that I saw it as her twisting the knife into Daigo's heart even further.  Like, look at this guy I sold your family farm to, I might fuck him too, I never fucked you or wanted to.) 


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Posted 19 March 2014 - 05:03 AM

Of course, could use some better formatting, you know, bolds and italics and stuff, but I don't see anything wrong.

When I copied it in I had to spend ten minutes removing all the tags that broke v.v


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Posted 19 March 2014 - 05:45 AM

Copy and paste in rich text format. Don't bother messing with coding or anything.

 

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Posted 19 March 2014 - 06:05 AM

@L: Could you please take a look at it again. I formatted in better and put in some more info. Majorly combat related.



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Posted 19 March 2014 - 06:25 AM

hmm L, would my character know your wandering swordsman? seem as he likes challenging and stuffs it wouldn't be too strange for the both of them to have crossed paths before


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Posted 19 March 2014 - 06:49 AM

And though I understand you're getting a lot of questions, how would ships be named for the Albion Empire? Such as HMS Sydney or whatever.


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Posted 19 March 2014 - 07:07 AM

And though I understand you're getting a lot of questions, how would ships be named for the Albion Empire? Such as HMS Sydney or whatever.

 

Anything with a name really, As I've been seeing, ships in the late 1700's-1800's were pretty simple names either regular name, locations or just 'things'.

Like 'Ariel', 'HMS Beagle', 'America', 'Bounty', etc etc.

 

Something like that is fine.


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Posted 19 March 2014 - 07:15 AM

Cheers^^


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Posted 19 March 2014 - 07:39 AM

Yep. Pretty much that.






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