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#21 ZCOverload

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Posted 08 January 2016 - 05:14 AM

Mate you just replied to a 2 year old thread.


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#22 _Manga_Artist_Benny-San_

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Posted 08 January 2016 - 05:23 AM

12424384_1091383984228599_1018384316_n.j Maybe Something Like This? Idk


 

Mate you just replied to a 2 year old thread.

I know  :lol:



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Posted 08 January 2016 - 06:36 AM

@_Manga_Artist_Benny-San_ you really like your flaming eyebrows xD
(anyway, as already noted, this thread is old, and the original poster vanished after creating it, so it's unlikely to get any reply from them, or any progress, but if it's just for training that's an other thing :P )

Edited by Zeando, 08 January 2016 - 06:38 AM.

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#24 _Manga_Artist_Benny-San_

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Posted 08 January 2016 - 08:58 AM

@_Manga_Artist_Benny-San_ you really like your flaming eyebrows xD
(anyway, as already noted, this thread is old, and the original poster vanished after creating it, so it's unlikely to get any reply from them, or any progress, but if it's just for training that's an other thing :P )

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#25 Lorenx1

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Posted 11 January 2016 - 09:38 AM

the first draft for the main chracter of my manga would like some critique please.
 
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The hair looks OK. But his body proportions aren't correct. We have a mix of heavy built mixed with light built.

I would recommend looking into what type of build you want him to be.

Additionally seems to resemble closer to Cloud from ff7.
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Posted 11 January 2016 - 01:35 PM

LOREN

DUDE

2 YEAR OLD POST

JUST WENT OVER THAT


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Posted 11 January 2016 - 03:02 PM

ahhh....oh well
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