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#21 steamjunkie

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Posted 19 November 2014 - 04:02 PM

WOW, I wasn't expecting that! Amazing, thanks a lot, I love it! This is the second fan art I recieve of one of my series and the first for dead+heart! XD

Is it ok for me to upload it on my facebook page in the fan art section? I will also link to your deviantart or any personal site you wish :D

 

HAHA No problem! Upload it wherever you like. My DA is:  steamjunkie.deviantart.com 

 

I'm glad that you like it. I know how much artists appreciate having other people draw their stuff, so I thought it might brighten your mood LOL


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Posted 19 November 2014 - 04:48 PM

HAHA No problem! Upload it wherever you like. My DA is:  steamjunkie.deviantart.com 

 

I'm glad that you like it. I know how much artists appreciate having other people draw their stuff, so I thought it might brighten your mood LOL

indeed, it did brighten my mood :D

I uploaded it on my facebook page then!
 


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Posted 19 November 2014 - 06:49 PM

Well I guess since I had such nice feedback i might as well share something while the chapter isnt completed.

here`s a page I just finished yesterday, still just the lineart(no screentones nor text)

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I also uploaded it on my facebook

I still struggle a lot with asymmetry,,,,


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Posted 19 November 2014 - 06:52 PM

Female faces are still a lot better though!


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Posted 19 November 2014 - 11:39 PM

And the page with screentones:

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I will try not to spam this too much from now on, besides I cant show all pages or it will ruin the surprise :D


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Posted 20 November 2014 - 05:25 PM

One thing i would like to ask:
Im wondering what is the best way to update my series. I think that monthly is acceptable but kinda too long. My experience as a reader as shown me that you easily forget what was even going on on the last chapter in monthly series. So I was wondering if bi weekly is better? also would you guys hate a update of just 10 pages a time?

also what time would you prefer the update? im thinking fridays nights

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Posted 20 November 2014 - 05:38 PM

10 pages is too little for monthly. Vinland Saga told me that.

 

But for weekly or bi-weekly it's just fine. C:


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Posted 24 November 2014 - 06:28 PM

hey again guys, i need an opinon.

this is a page from my series Bleak:
http://www.thedreamc...k/en/0/5/page/3

how are the female faces here?
 


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Posted 24 November 2014 - 07:01 PM

A bit. When she smiled she still looked a bit boyish. (Ironically in that same panel, the boy looked like a girl.) Altogether though it's an improvement.


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Posted 24 November 2014 - 08:50 PM

One thing i would like to ask:
Im wondering what is the best way to update my series. I think that monthly is acceptable but kinda too long. My experience as a reader as shown me that you easily forget what was even going on on the last chapter in monthly series. So I was wondering if bi weekly is better? also would you guys hate a update of just 10 pages a time?

also what time would you prefer the update? im thinking fridays nights

any thoughts?

 

You don't have to fill both of the page and time conditions tbh. You can choose to be regular on one of these, and be free on the other one.

 

I personally don't care how many pages I read as long as the update comes on the promised time.


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Posted 24 November 2014 - 08:51 PM

One thing i would like to ask:
Im wondering what is the best way to update my series. I think that monthly is acceptable but kinda too long. My experience as a reader as shown me that you easily forget what was even going on on the last chapter in monthly series. So I was wondering if bi weekly is better? also would you guys hate a update of just 10 pages a time?

also what time would you prefer the update? im thinking fridays nights

any thoughts?

 

I think it depends on what you want to do with it. If you want to be featured on a site like Inkblazers or something, all you have to do is 15 pages a month.

 

I agree that 10 pages every two weeks does sound pretty decent for someone who is doing everything themselves.

 

I think you should update either Wednesday, Thursday, or Friday because a lot of people will be on the internet/forums after their dose of JUMP is over LOL.

 

 

hey again guys, i need an opinon.

this is a page from my series Bleak:
http://www.thedreamc...k/en/0/5/page/3

how are the female faces here?
 

 

They have always been good, but I think the problem is, in your style, everyone has a flat chin. That can be perceived as masculine.

 

Girls usually have pointy chins in Anime/Manga. I mocked up a little something to show you the difference that the "Pointy Chin Method" can have:

 

Spoiler POINTY CHINS EVERYWHERE!!!!

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Posted 24 November 2014 - 09:01 PM

Damn, that is a HUGE difference. Holy shit I never noticed that.


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Posted 24 November 2014 - 09:25 PM

I think it depends on what you want to do with it. If you want to be featured on a site like Inkblazers or something, all you have to do is 15 pages a month.

 

I agree that 10 pages every two weeks does sound pretty decent for someone who is doing everything themselves.

 

I think you should update either Wednesday, Thursday, or Friday because a lot of people will be on the internet/forums after their dose of JUMP is over LOL.

 

 

 

They have always been good, but I think the problem is, in your style, everyone has a flat chin. That can be perceived as masculine.

 

Girls usually have pointy chins in Anime/Manga. I mocked up a little something to show you the difference that the "Pointy Chin Method" can have:

 

Spoiler POINTY CHINS EVERYWHERE!!!!

 

Yeah i know, but the thing is I want to create my own style and I decided my style will have to be a bit more semi realistic than the usual anime/ manga, yet not too realistic. What I mean is I want the female faces to show they are young woman instead of having the same round face for every character and the nose being a small. So im trying to find the perfect format for the face to show that.

not sure if I explained myself correctly xD
 


 

You don't have to fill both of the page and time conditions tbh. You can choose to be regular on one of these, and be free on the other one.

 

I personally don't care how many pages I read as long as the update comes on the promised time.

 

awesome point. I think I was too obsessed with the page count but indeed I dont have to be too strict with that.


 

A bit. When she smiled she still looked a bit boyish. (Ironically in that same panel, the boy looked like a girl.) Altogether though it's an improvement.

 

The "boy" in that panel is indeed a girl xD a little girl to be precise, thats why her face is rounder than Sane (the other female character.)


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Posted 24 November 2014 - 09:28 PM

The "boy" in that panel is indeed a girl

 

*cough cough*


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Posted 24 November 2014 - 09:29 PM

Now with Naruto over only one piece and bleach though, I wonder if I should update the day they come out since more people will be lurking the forums on those days, but at same time the fact that the big 2 are out may obfuscate my updates since many people love to discuss the chapters all day


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Posted 25 November 2014 - 01:15 AM

Also, if you're looking for semi-realistic, look at the art styles of some more-realistic manga out there. Vinland Saga is a good example.

 

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As you can see, her face is more rounded and her chin is, in fact, more pointy than the males'. Here in this page, on the bottom panel you can see Thorfinn's chin is more squared out.

 

Spoiler

 

So it's not a question of "I'm going for a more unique semi-realistic style". It's a question of just how anatomy works. Sure, you might not want your faces being stereotypically moemoe (and trust me, for the art style you have, they might as well be, looking at some similarly-drawn stuff like Air Gear and Blazer Drive), but they can't look TOO manly.


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Posted 27 November 2014 - 01:23 AM

Yeah i know, but the thing is I want to create my own style and I decided my style will have to be a bit more semi realistic than the usual anime/ manga, yet not too realistic. What I mean is I want the female faces to show they are young woman instead of having the same round face for every character and the nose being a small. So im trying to find the perfect format for the face to show that.

not sure if I explained myself correctly xD
 

 

I completely understand. I was the same way not too long ago. I didn't want my style to be too generic, so I tried to avoid it, but then everyone said that my girls looked like boys. And then I joined the Dark Side... where there is cake.

 

The pointy chin thing is a bit of a crutch though. It's just the easiest/quickest way to get the result, but by no means is it the only way. 

 

I would never dream of telling you that your art is "wrong" or that there is a "correct" way to do things. I respect your choice.  :kakashi:

 

Now with Naruto over only one piece and bleach though, I wonder if I should update the day they come out since more people will be lurking the forums on those days, but at same time the fact that the big 2 are out may obfuscate my updates since many people love to discuss the chapters all day

 

You could always bring Wednesdays back. Now that JUMP mostly comes out on Thursdays, you can be the new thing that people look forward to on Hump Day!

 

Or... catch the leftover heavy debaters on Friday. 

 

Also, I know this is the wrong thread, but I just finished reading Bleak and decided to sketch those characters too!

 

Spoiler BLEAK!!!

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Posted 27 November 2014 - 08:29 AM

I completely understand. I was the same way not too long ago. I didn't want my style to be too generic, so I tried to avoid it, but then everyone said that my girls looked like boys. And then I joined the Dark Side... where there is cake.
 
The pointy chin thing is a bit of a crutch though. It's just the easiest/quickest way to get the result, but by no means is it the only way. 
 
I would never dream of telling you that your art is "wrong" or that there is a "correct" way to do things. I respect your choice.  :kakashi:
 

 
You could always bring Wednesdays back. Now that JUMP mostly comes out on Thursdays, you can be the new thing that people look forward to on Hump Day!
 
Or... catch the leftover heavy debaters on Friday. 
 
Also, I know this is the wrong thread, but I just finished reading Bleak and decided to sketch those characters too!
 

Hahaha, awesome! Really nice drawing, one more fanart for me to look at all day ^^ !
Sane looks really cute haha ( later I will add on my facebook like the other one ok?mlinking to your dA like the other one!)

Wednesday is a good idea, I guess I may try both on diferent date So!


Also, nice! you read bleak! What did you think??

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Posted 07 December 2014 - 05:18 PM

So far loving both bleak and dead+hearts, can we get a little tiny character bio just to fill in the space between now and when you release the chapters could be even just one, so we get a little more info on the characters and the world even if it's for bleak that's cool. If you do decide on bi weekly 10-15 pages a chapter aren't a prob and would more than keep us reading. Really looking forward to seeing the mummy and zombie in action tho.

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@steamjunkie do you have any mangas or one shots your art is crazy good, willing to read any material you have

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Posted 07 December 2014 - 07:34 PM

So far loving both bleak and dead+hearts, can we get a little tiny character bio just to fill in the space between now and when you release the chapters could be even just one, so we get a little more info on the characters and the world even if it's for bleak that's cool. If you do decide on bi weekly 10-15 pages a chapter aren't a prob and would more than keep us reading. Really looking forward to seeing the mummy and zombie in action tho.

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@steamjunkie do you have any mangas or one shots your art is crazy good, willing to read any material you have

@punk

 

thanks a lot!
Maybe I will give the bio thing a try, but not sure what i want to say or not since some stuff may be spoilers...
Im also focusing on producing pages right now, but I will think about it.

Any kind of info you would like to be mentioned in the bio? One thing thats actually really important is how to pronounce their names, because I created their names with Portuguese pronouncing in mind (my natve language)

Sane for example is pronounced "Sun" with a more focus on the "n" 
AF is "Ah F"
Hart is how you would pronounce in english

In Dead heart Ea is "Eh Ah"


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