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#1 Metal Heart

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Posted 15 February 2015 - 06:06 PM

This is my creepypasta/poetry/possibly art if I ever decide to learn how to draw thread. Enjoy.

 

Spoiler The Gray Man


This kind of happened.

 

Spoiler The mysterious haunted house

 

This definitely happened, unless I am lying.

 

Spoiler The Holes

 

What happens when you cross The enigma of Amigara Fault with a Pipa Pipa frog?


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Posted 16 February 2015 - 12:11 PM

The last one reminded me a lot of the Welcome to Night Vale episode about condo's.

Nice work though~


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Posted 16 February 2015 - 02:33 PM

The last one reminded me a lot of the Welcome to Night Vale episode about condo's.

Nice work though~

Dont know that one at all actually XD But thank you~ I like doing creepy stories.

 

 

Now, more childhood weirdness.

 

Spoiler Enigma of the locked doors

 

 

I did promise poetry, heres that one poem I won an award for.

 

Spoiler Inphoria

 

 

Here's one I did not win a prize for.

 

Spoiler The Summer Horror

 

Yes, I dont actually have any new poetry to show you, deal with it, at least you wont have to look through the poetry contests to find them now.


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Posted 16 February 2015 - 11:24 PM

The first poetry post is nice, the internet and what we end up doing with it.

 

As for your creepypastas, I enjoy reading them although the one about the holes somehow feels like it could have been expanded but the format you used (journal entry) is enough to get the point across.


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Spoiler To find out why I had to add the second line to my sig, check link in the spoiler

 

Spoiler I wonder if people actually read what I put here

 


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Posted 08 March 2015 - 02:34 AM


What happens when you cross The enigma of Amigara Fault with a Pipa Pipa frog?

 

A pipe-shaped eldritch abomination? (pipa means pipe in Bahasa, btw)

 

I love The Holes.


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Posted 08 March 2015 - 07:53 AM

A pipe-shaped eldritch abomination? (pipa means pipe in Bahasa, btw)

 

I love The Holes.

No, search for Pipa pipa frog, creepy things.


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Posted 06 April 2015 - 09:08 AM

Spoiler My Girl

 

I do not have, need, want or understand the concept of a girlfriend, but the rest is true.


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Posted 01 May 2015 - 03:16 PM

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And today no one remembers anything.


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Posted 01 May 2015 - 05:14 PM

I found your stories very refreshing and unique!

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Posted 11 May 2015 - 06:24 PM

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I wrote this without thinking or planning much at all. So enjoy my stream of consciousness.


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Posted 12 May 2015 - 06:38 AM

It's pretty nice as a story. However, you need to change a few things with your punctuation. Use ; or — for example to mark a pause instead of only a comma. The flow of the story would improve, I think. 

You also lack a comma between "Food could be a problem" and "Tim thought to himself". 


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Posted 16 May 2015 - 11:46 AM

It's pretty nice as a story. However, you need to change a few things with your punctuation. Use ; or — for example to mark a pause instead of only a comma. The flow of the story would improve, I think. 

You also lack a comma between "Food could be a problem" and "Tim thought to himself". 

Oh, right, I never bothered to learn how to use those XD

 

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A collection of old police and news reports regarding enigmatic murders in the early 2000s.


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Posted 13 December 2015 - 06:47 AM

I am alive, you did not expect that, now did you?

 

Great Cthulhu do I have some completely meaningless poetry and two really good scary stories for you.

 

Spoiler

 

I honestly do not know what this is.

 

Spoiler Late Night Television

 

Contrary to popular belief the Elder Gods sometimes take more pleasant forms.

 

Spoiler The Great Shining Butterfly

 

Growing up means starting to fear things you did not fear as a child, maybe things you should fear, or... well, unthings.

 

Spoiler There is nothing under your bed

 

What would life be without art?

 

Spoiler Blood and Art


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Posted 15 December 2015 - 09:55 AM

It's interesting if a bit cliche to put parts of Late Night Television through a text-to-speech synthesizer. Strange.


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Posted 15 December 2015 - 11:14 AM

It's interesting if a bit cliche to put parts of Late Night Television through a text-to-speech synthesizer. Strange.

... I am not sure why I did not think of that... I almost prefer it like that.


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Posted 15 December 2015 - 12:34 PM

Put it in whisper; repeat at least 4 times. Joy. (if only it can combine Whisper with Female 3)

 

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Dat vibe of "Memory" in the third poem from above. Love.


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Posted 04 January 2016 - 01:15 AM

After someone challenged me to make kids with fishbowls on their heads playing astronauts scary this happened

 

 

Spoiler Fishbowl Astronauts


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Posted 19 January 2016 - 05:24 PM

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