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#1 Red Opus

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Posted 15 March 2015 - 08:20 PM

Sons of the Wilted Bamboos

 

Waltz with the goddess of the willow trees, Scribes of the honey bees,

Listening to the lectures of the wolves of the money leaves.

Hallucinations of my deepest thoughts, the pride of a lion,

Like the march of the black jews on the path to Tzion.

 

*Enhale*

 

Light spectrum to the prism, the narcotics is the prison

but the locust burst my ear drums so i could never listen

to the words of the wise, the snakes speak wisdom

The Result? The Demi-God another victim of the system...

 

*Exhale*....Peace peace peace....

 

Cut the optic nerve to the vision from the third eye,

so we compensate and see the world from a bird's eye

Attempts to escape the mental sphere, but do we really ever try

Or was this entire farce just an excuse for us to get high....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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Posted 17 March 2015 - 12:08 AM

Negus

 

Life is all in vain...

The Watchman Watches,

Watching his watch in vain but

Real history only leaks in blotches...

Only the winners have penmanship,

My destiny is not written in pages

The gospel preached in a 7 second clip

through the grape vine i only heard desperation

Anger seeping through the lips of suppressed nations!!

 

 

Can you feel emotions in battle scars and lost limbs?

no matter your complexion you will get shot....why?

because the kings starve in the very lands they built

because the men that can move mountains let the oceans remain still!

Peace is an opinion

 

Peace Peace peace.......


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Posted 17 April 2015 - 07:42 PM

Aston Martin chances, money clips and belly dancers

Classic Rolls Royce, Henry Ford's grandson

McLaren dreams, thick cakes and lots of cream

Lamborghini jeans, Ferrari cocaine scenes 

 

The lives of the living but simply visions

Caught up in the system, numbers cause division

Bright lights enticing, You get the mike tyson

The money come and go quick like lightning


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Posted 11 May 2015 - 10:28 PM

The Odd-Eyed Doppler, Phantom of the Chakras

Born of the Kings jesus christ couldn't stop us

The almighty Thunder, The 33rd Wonder

I could never fail, trip, fall or Blunder

Lust in the mind, Mystery in the flesh

Walked from jerusalem, no time for rest

 

I confess, I sometimes do aim to please

Load, Cock back, clutch and squeeze the steel

just a method of survival, Walking with my eyes low

Killing all rivals....


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Posted 13 May 2015 - 12:27 AM

even if you have a long neck you can't constantly consume trees

only herbivores consume leaves on a daily basis, but you have a trunk full

Only focused on the green, So we have no idea how the chlorophyll

Don't understand the bigger picture, so you need the edison to 

understand photo synthesis, that means if you don't get it,

flash the light and you eventually will, it was too late, he didn't 

feel the heat only worrying about how high he has to climb until

he seize the fruits, but without a strong following his empire

failed from the roots.......but no one was around to hear it

so did it really happen?


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Posted 15 June 2015 - 10:15 PM

Enciting writing, I might go mike...

Pick one Jordan, Jackson Tyson..

Comparable only to poseiden's trident

personification of zeus's lightning..like a UFO sighting....

but i'm just writing......wright brother?

Even if i'm just testing it's still fly wright brother?

But the words are deep and the pen is heavy

I need about 8 arms just to hold it steady...

The pad is the bible, The ink is the blood of jesus

Holy scriptures written from the mind of heathens

Father Figure? what a luxury, didn't need it i guess

never taught the birds and the bees, I'm not upset

In that wrangler denim I can probably sow seeds

Be reincarnated in the jeans of your family tree

These days my life is gone with the leaves in the wind

The voice of young minds that are needing to win

 

I am God...


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Posted 27 June 2015 - 10:50 PM

Introspection

 

Tell me, who is the God among thee?

The king born of the sycamore tree

cursed from the roots

the produce is still born fruit,

curse the men of flesh

may the souls of their ancestors never rest

Sewn with the hands of the dead

Planted the seeds of denim genes

The thread of life starts with a family tree

May the 3 fates have mercy on your bloodline

For your struggle rest not in vein

and the spark of life is the ink in which we write

the pages of the bible as we like, wright?


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Posted 28 June 2015 - 10:22 PM

Nice, but one quibble - I think you meant to use "vain" and not "vein" in the 11th line, unless I missed a connection somewhere.


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Posted 28 June 2015 - 10:26 PM

Nice, but one quibble - I think you meant to use "vain" and not "vein" in the 11th line, unless I missed a connection somewhere.

bloodline = vein / vain...though idk what kind of literary thing that would be called, i'm guessing a double entandre...i think?


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Posted 28 June 2015 - 10:37 PM

bloodline = vein / vain...though idk what kind of literary thing that would be called, i'm guessing a double entandre...i think?

Ah, that makes sense then. 

 

Not a double entendre; maybe an allegory?


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Posted 28 June 2015 - 10:45 PM

Ah, that makes sense then. 

 

Not a double entendre; maybe an allegory?

probably this, whatever it is it's the same thing i did with jeans/genes


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Posted 06 July 2015 - 09:04 PM

Body Fissures

 

The crackling echoes of my mind billowing into oblivion

A heart searing in agony, as black as obsidian

Intelligence found in the gaping crevices of my brain

Elusive, In bliss ignorance I remain


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Posted 22 July 2015 - 06:02 PM

Future of a young wolf is suicidal
Loner tendencies are ever present
Reflections are his dearest rivals
Lacking enthusiasm and effervescence

Emotions are things he feels he can't feel
Ignorance is madness with his potential
Living by what is perceived to be real
Consistency is essential

What would van gough be without a canvas
Just another eccentric diagnosed with madness
Or just an unappreciated savage
What legacy will we leave on this planet

What is a mad man with a brush? An artist

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Posted 24 July 2015 - 10:29 PM

Dreams, fleeting memories of lives once lived

Medically Died twice but only had one life to live

So i spent it in sin

Am I wrong? Well I have no fucks to give

 

Like you sleeping on the couch

Like having arguments with a spouse

Get what you desire, Live until we all get tired

everyone ends up in god spawn Hell fire


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Posted 04 September 2015 - 10:32 PM

This is what I right on writers block

Back in my day we used to write on blocks

2500 BC writing on writer's blocks

This is a sumerian writer's block

 

How dare you take this skill for granite

My pen hot, it'll rock everything inside this planet

Stone cold, unable to be shocked

how can lightning strike a man on writer's block


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Posted 17 September 2015 - 10:18 PM

It's just different, it feels different....

 

 

Frankly I may be sinatra...

Brown Phantom of the Opera

King Arthur with this arthritis 

An author with arthritis

How did arthur write this

With a hand of arthritis

Zeus's lightning

Poseiden's trident

What are those?

The names of pens I write with

Up Mt Olympus hiking

Fighting vikings

striking white lightning

with perfect timing

My mind is a scientific instrument

An infinite symphony

The synthesis of innocents

Either God itself or the equivalent

One thought process will resonate

Make jesus start to levitate

Enough to start an earthquake

Make the dead regenerate

Delusions of a dead man living

What's sin to a man who loves sinning

I am untouchable

Unloveable

gullible

vunerable

dysfunctional

The lowest common multiple

And last of all

I am Man

I am King

I am God


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Posted 19 September 2015 - 09:02 PM

A change in symbols

 

When I'm writing

Is it the right thing

I just write things

My ideas come from left field

I knock them out of the park

Hoping I did the right thing

 

Will butterflies chased by children

Appear in the mind's eye

Symbols of the occult lurking

Illuminated by a night's sky

Stars seen in the witching hour

Feeding a family tree

Gods drinking from the river styx

Demon arts revived by men who crave power

Written by the son of man, a number 3

Uttered by the throat of demons, the sound of 6


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Posted 25 September 2015 - 07:27 PM

Non existent

Maybe I care to much to notice the little things
Or maybe I care to much to address them
I wanted to see you undressing but..
Maybe I feel to much to even notice you slipping
Away from my hands and into another man's
Then I remember I took you away from another man
Maybe this is gods plan
But I don't believe in him
So what's the price for sinning
A lesson well learned, wounds from today heal tomorrow
This is time well borrowed
I want to do special things to you but you're just not serious
I'm deep but, you're not interested in plot holes, you're not that curious
Maybe I need to fall back and appreciate what's been given to me
And not dwell on whatever skills I lack
Because these things can be learned
But if I loose myself that's the one thing im never getting back
But im rambling now, im not gods gift to earth
I'm not perfect its about time I soul search
And this is just emotion im not gonna edit this
Straight from the chest so nobody could discredit this..
I'm limitless, I am God, but no one else seems to think so..

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Posted 05 October 2015 - 09:30 PM

Brain Leakage

 

Would you hurt my soul?

Or sell yours for a ton of gold?

Conflicted compositions,

Thoughts from the mind it was written

Long ago in ancient lands perhaps

But not in the times of vanity

The man in me does not strive for family

I need complete freedom and sanity

Freed from the labels they branded me

Except that they branded me a winner

And now I'm conflicted

At a cross roads in the composition

Are we really what we claim to be

Are we really kings that rule here

What about the deep sea? The Atmosphere?

This is not even poetry

At this point I don't even know what it is

Why should I even publish this? It's rubbish

This is what people would call brain leakage

No real topic, just a brain with a mouth speaking


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Posted 08 October 2015 - 08:26 PM

Monologue

 

I spent an eternity internally

Contemplating my flaws

Comparing myself against my peers

Rousing a potential that laid in Dormancy

Testing my Limits, arriving at a wall

Seeking out my darkest fears

The conclusion...

I am inadequate...

All of these gifts I've acquired

Cut from the cloth of Gods

Easily destined to be great

And all I have to show, all my life's work

Amounts to a half baked creativity....

This is no poem, no beautiful work of art

This is a bleeding wrist, only ink flows out

What about the women, the mistresses

When you spend nights on an Icy peak

How can life not be bleak

I'm blind but not Homer like

Eternally the loner type

Out of touch and awkward

I just don't want to be me

I want to make everybody proud

Be what, everybody thinks i'm  meant to be:

Every great leader you can possibly imagine

An intellectual Behemoth

A heart breaker

A shoulder to lean on

Perceived greatness follows me even in death

The sheep will praise my name with my dying breath

If I should slit my wrist with a fountain pen

Or disappear never to be heard from again

They would say "He went crazy cuz' he was too intelligent"

Peace of mind is an esoteric absurdity

Perceived perfection, follows me for eternity


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