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#1 Yamagician

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Posted 17 May 2015 - 12:57 AM

Spoiler 16.May.15

 

Spoiler The House

 

Spoiler A Robots Death
 

Edited by Yamagician, 06 August 2015 - 03:04 PM.


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Posted 17 May 2015 - 01:38 PM

Eh. Could be better.

 

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Posted 08 June 2015 - 11:49 PM

I have a story I'm building upon; until then, I'll just post cryptic words that pertain to the plot.

 

Spoiler The First


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Posted 09 June 2015 - 12:32 AM

That sounds really similar to something I had pitched a while ago, haha.

 

http://onemangaforum...cepts/?p=457059

 

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Posted 09 June 2015 - 12:45 AM

That sounds really similar to something I had pitched a while ago, haha.

 

http://onemangaforum...cepts/?p=457059

 

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"A shell filled with a volatile substance leaking out and corrupting with every foul word she spews.
Sometimes I like to think back and wonder, “Was it worth it?”" I know some people that can relate to this, it hit home for me as well :lol: I loved the first part of it a lot, had me quite intrigued. I think I lost it at the second part however, but that can also be contributed to the fact that it is awfully late for myself.

 

With that said, I whipped up another cryptic paragraph in about 20mins on lack of sleep.

 

Spoiler The Second


I say cryptic, but this might as well be the opening of the story. I'm sure I'll think otherwise in the morning after some shuteye though.


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Posted 17 June 2015 - 02:02 PM

Spoiler The Beginning

 

I feel that hateful urge to leave yet another uncompleted work. I suppose I should think of a title to spark my imagination.


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Posted 17 June 2015 - 04:23 PM

Spoiler The Beginning

 

I feel that hateful urge to leave yet another uncompleted work. I suppose I should think of a title to spark my imagination.

Interesting start.  The sentence structure and phrasing needs some work, there are some grammar issues, but overall, not bad at all.


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Posted 02 July 2015 - 12:23 PM

Interesting start.  The sentence structure and phrasing needs some work, there are some grammar issues, but overall, not bad at all.

 

Thank you! I changed it a bit; hopefully it's an easier read now. Grammar and phrasing were never my strong points  :D



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Posted 06 August 2015 - 03:02 PM

Spoiler A Robots Death

Edited by Yamagician, 06 August 2015 - 03:03 PM.


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Posted 07 October 2015 - 03:07 AM

Spoiler The Red Rose is Plucked


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