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Poll: Yoga Day Round (9 member(s) have cast votes)

Which is the best?

  1. Red Opus - The Sycamore Tree (4 votes [44.44%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 44.44%

  2. Metal Heart - Twisted (2 votes [22.22%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 22.22%

  3. Fulmine - [Untitled] (0 votes [0.00%])

    Percentage of vote: 0.00%

  4. Oben - Dalí teaches Yoga (3 votes [33.33%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 33.33%

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#1 Oben

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Posted 29 June 2015 - 04:16 PM

Welcome to the Voting for this Special Round of the Poetry Contest
 
The topic was "International Yoga Day" ^^

The poll should be self-explanatory. Please vote objectively, and fair.
You are not allowed to vote for yourself.

Please also post your opinions/criticism in the thread.
Keep in mind that the length of the poems was limited from the start.

Here are the entries for this round:

 


Spoiler The Sycamore Tree



Spoiler Twisted


 

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Spoiler Dalí teaches Yoga


Voting closes on July 6th.

Edited by Oben, 03 July 2015 - 12:16 PM.

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Posted 30 June 2015 - 11:42 AM

I still can't believe I missed reading the poems of the precedent round. I'll still read them, even if the contest is over. 

 

I hesitated between Red Opus and Oben this time. And I might still change my vote, depending on how many times I read those two poems. 

I mean, Oben evokes interesting images, and I like that in poetry. 

On the other hand, Red Opus is more classic, with internal echoes and a pretty good rhythm. It works pretty well and adds to the meaning. 


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#3 Metal Heart

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Posted 30 June 2015 - 03:29 PM

Red Opus, you always have a great flow, but Oben was good too.


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Posted 30 June 2015 - 05:32 PM

Ty much it was a tough subject all of the entire for this one was surprisingly great, @Fulmine made what I thought was sexy poetry akin to what yowid does

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Posted 30 June 2015 - 09:56 PM

@Fulmine made what I thought was sexy poetry akin to what yowid does

I don't know, I just wrote down whatever came into my mind at that time when I thought about yoga, a brain-storm-ish result through and through...don't even know if it means anything LOL But then my mind is by default imaginative (read: dirty and horny) so yeah...probably... :hurr:


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#6 Red Opus

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Posted 01 July 2015 - 06:45 AM

This is foreshadowing for the next special contest...

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Posted 06 July 2015 - 03:59 PM

Red Opus wins the Special Round!

 

He doesn't get to choose the next theme, since it was already picked by Metal Heart for his win in round #26!



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Posted 06 July 2015 - 06:46 PM

Woo @Greg a wise man once said...."gimmie my money"




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