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#1641 Tale

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Posted 27 January 2018 - 05:14 AM


It was getting a little frustrating to me to see how Shin seemed to be always portrayed in a way in which he showed ''no brain''.

 

Yup. Even his army seems to think him an idiot. The soldiers around Ten seem shocked at the proposal. I've always hated that.


Edited by Tale, 27 January 2018 - 05:14 AM.

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#1642 Nergal131

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Posted 31 January 2018 - 09:19 AM

http://sensescans.co...n/50/546/page/1

 

Pretty impressive.

 

Also, Kingdom on break next week.


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Posted 31 January 2018 - 10:38 AM

Sometimes these 1 week breaks, especially at a point like this, are more frustrating than the inevitable months long HxH breaks.
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#1644 Kaidou

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Posted 31 January 2018 - 11:00 AM

Dayum, Shin finally making a massive progressive to becoming a great general. Nice to see him been good in using stratergy even if its messy.



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Posted 06 February 2018 - 09:26 AM

Pretty sure we all know Gyou'un is going to lose this bout, he charged into the main characters HQ after all. Though I guess it's possible he could get away.

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Posted 12 February 2018 - 12:11 PM

http://sensescans.co...n/50/547/page/1

 

Estimate on how long this bout would take?

 

That guy can talk all he want, but that doesn't moot his other achiements.

 

Btw, who is the guy that said squad transfer?



#1647 ShinmenTakezo

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Posted 12 February 2018 - 04:36 PM

Wow that was bad, one of Kingdom´s biggest flaws strikes again


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#1648 YyAoMmIi

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Posted 12 February 2018 - 05:04 PM

Wow that was bad, one of Kingdom´s biggest flaws strikes again

explain a bit more?

 

do felt that chapter was a bit off. 



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Posted 13 February 2018 - 12:35 AM

http://sensescans.co...n/50/547/page/1

 

Estimate on how long this bout would take?

 

That guy can talk all he want, but that doesn't moot his other achiements.

 

Btw, who is the guy that said squad transfer?

Presumably second-in-command of Naki's unit, I think his name is Ro Bin.


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#1650 ShinmenTakezo

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Posted 13 February 2018 - 02:54 AM

explain a bit more?

 

do felt that chapter was a bit off. 

 

Kingdom has a problem with shoehorning the next super duper strong guy who could beat Qin´s six without problems but for some reason we have never heard of him, thus have no relation, buid-up and thus investment in the character, and thus these words feel empty to the audience and the character seems like a plot device to further Shin´s development. Just adding some half a chapter backstory after his introduction does not change much.

Except Riboku and Houken, and to a small extent Karin now since we get a chapter or two here and there about her, Hara does not do a good job with his antagonists.

Heck, you do not even have to show him beforehand or anything, but simply build up your world in advance, include the story of this guy and his master much earlier, so it´s in the back of our heads. And the moment he gets introduced, you already have a context to his character.

Now he is just faceless badass number 23.


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#1651 YyAoMmIi

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Posted 13 February 2018 - 10:12 AM

Oh, you mean the Great General of the Week thing.

 

last seen with Kisu guy last war.



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Posted 13 February 2018 - 01:24 PM

Oh, you mean the Great General of the Week thing.

 

last seen with Kisu guy last war.

 

Sure, another example, but with him it´s at least more nuanced. He was just simply staying in his castle and wanted only to protect that, that dude was supposed to be a secret and thus shock both Qin and Zhou, so with him i somewhat can justify it.

 

Any other before or after him though...


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Posted 21 February 2018 - 11:22 AM

NEW CHAPTER IS UP:

http://sensescans.co...n/51/548/page/1

 

 

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