Here's my CS. This took me 5 non-stop hours.
I realize some things may need to be tweaked, so let me know. I didn't put any numbers on tools — just assume the upper limit, or just enough not to be encumbered. A couple knives here and there shouldn't weigh too much, anyhow. I also mucked around with the template, I think it looks cleaner this way (no offense!).
A question: Body Flicker jutsu is listed as a D-rank, but I'm hesitant to write it down. Will it have any sort of combat merit? As in, will it actually function as a teleport, or will my opponents see my character running around? Is there a point to getting it? Body replacement technique basically does the same thing, but better, and that one's free.
Overall nice I like it, just a few things.
I plan to have those ninja tool numbers affect the rp and the missions your on. As we go further in the rp and people start to get into a flow and rhythm we can start ignoring numbers but for now I want them to stay.
Your Element is just the starting type you are born with whether you know it or not, unless your still thinking about what it is.
You don't actually have to list Silent Killing, unless your doing that to emphasize that it is part of your main jutsu set. But you can just put that in your preferred fighting style section. But that is completely up to you, doesn't effect CS acceptance.
To answer your question Body Flicker is listed under the free jutsu, if I remember correctly it is the only D-rank their so it is nothing to worry about. And yes it will have combat merritt, body switch only works if their is something to switch with, and the only people able to see you moving that fast are your jounin instructors and up. Some may be able to catch a glimpse of the direction you went but the faster you are the less likely that is. It all depends on you and how you use it.
Looking back on it most of this is pretty trivial, your CS is good enough for acceptance although I would like for you to address the tools and element stuff.
However I do have questions about that KG. Does it only work through physical contact or does it work on anything that involves your chakra like jutsu. Lets say you do an AoE genjutsu like what was used during the chunin exams, would everyone in the affected area start to have their chakra drain and go to you? Or Kisame 's technique where he expels water from his mouth to make up for a lack of a water source, are the people in the water and standing on the water effected by devouring chakra?
*Side note* It has been ten years from the start of the war until now, idk about you but I find their to be a pretty big difference between the ages of 4 and 7.
Damn. You put a lot more thought into your preferred fighting style than I thought we needed to. Now I wanna go edit mine
Your not the only one, but as the rp goes on I expect people will begin to elaborate and adjust their styles.
Edited by RathyOro, 15 October 2016 - 05:58 AM.